3 Things that I think would have helped to improve our presentation is that I think we should have had more time to practice.Secondly I think we should have thought about our presentation and our ideas and who was doing what ahead of time.Thirdly I would like to say that the volume needed to be cranked up. 2 Things that I think went really well is the rap because the lines were really meaningful and also that ostrich story because i think it was a really good story and it should be published as a children's book. 1 Piece of advice I have for students who will be performing in the future is that always look at the audience and try to take yourself seriously cause if you dont then the audience wont either.